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Going Horse-riding.
In Awarua I stayed with my Uncle Andrew.
We went horse-riding. I was very excited.
My favourite part was when I was going up the road.
When I was riding up the road I got excited
because it was so amazing.
Then I had to move off the road because
there was a car coming and the horse was running.
It was fun.
I rode the horse into the paddock.
I was happy that I high fived in the air
because the horse was running fast in the paddock.
It was so much fun.
Next I had to get off the horse because
I went to have dinner.
After dinner I went back on the horse
in the paddock.
After a while I got bored so I rode down to
the creek. It was cool so then I galloped to
the other paddock but then it started to rain.
So I went back to put the horse back where
it should be and then the rain stopped.